Saturday, 5 May 2012

Building Narrative

This week we have been tasked with creating a narrative that describes the some of the qualities of our building (from an architectural persepective) as well of the program as if observed through the eyes of a child. Here is my attempt. Enjoy :)

She pressed her nose against the cold glass window of the boat, trying to figure out what it was she could see. The day was gloomy… the air thick with the whisper of rain. As such, there was not much that could be seen from the window. She slumped back into her seat, disheartened, bored and cold. Then, as the boat began to slow, she feared they would be stuck there forever.

                Her teacher rose from his seat near the door and called them to attention, waking many from the early morning slumber induced by too little sleep or no breakfast. He ushered them, single file, from the boat, and she hugged herself for warmth as she trudged onto the jetty. Immediately she put her hands to her ears. After the relative quiet of the boat, her ears were assaulted by an intensity of traffic sounds. Of sirens and beeping horns. Of the laughter of her schoolmates and water splashing and a crow carking in the distance.

                Ahead she saw the backs of her classmates, but beyond this two large, whiteish pillars flanked by buildings that looked old and somewhat crumbly. Beyond this rose an enormous cliff, atop which were buildings and various scrubbly trees. In between this she noticed another building, which appeared to both blend in and stick out at the same time. It was both box-like and wibbly-wobbly at the same time. She thought it was weird!

                Suddenly she realised her classmate’s backs were growing smaller – they had moved towards the weird building. She jogged after them, drawing closer to the mouth of that crazy beast. Now on the threshold, the building loomed above her: it seemed to grow outwards from the base. Large glass doors welcomed her in. She stepped into the belly of the beast.

                Cautiously she lowered her hands from her ears. They were assaulted again… but this time by the low hum of insects, chirping of birds, human laughter and the occasional squeal from one of her classmates. And although she could hear nature… she certainly couldn’t see it.

                She looked around. To her left she noticed a sweeping staircase leading to a set of double doors. Following this she swept her eyes to the right, catching a glimpse of what looked like trees and a skyscraper through narrow glass windows. Shooting her eyes downward she was disappointed to see nothing but high walls, blank save for some posters and large text, at the base of which was a reception desk. Moving her eyes to the left again, she noticed another class door, with darkness and twinkling colourful lights beyond.

                Her teacher had been saying something, but she hadn’t been listening. As her classmates began to wander up the stairs after an unfamiliar woman, she thought she’d better drag herself along.

                Through the double doors at the top of the staircase her classmates filed into the rows of tiered seats. She chose one near the edge. The light was soft, and the walls appeared to be covered in wood. It was silent. At the front of the room was a large screen. Excellent, she thought, a movie. No work!!!

                The unfamiliar woman started talking about Brisbane Town, which seemed like a funny little place. The woman showed a really old film of some people working in what she said was now the Queen Street Mall. The woman talked about the way the city grew and changed, how the people changed, and how the plants, birds, animals and insects changed too. The woman said that they weren’t all found in Brisbane anymore, because the humans got too big and the city replaced the trees.

                Suddenly the woman pressed a button, and the screen rolled away. The class took a collective breath in… as they looked out on an abundance of trees, skyscrapers and birds. There was one question on everyone’s lips… how?!

                The class buzzed as they bounced back down the stairs, this time they were led towards the blank wall, which was revealed to be two walls overlapping one another. Around they went and entered another world.

                The girl looked up. Trees and skyscrapers towered above her. But above them, she saw silver, not blue. Inside?! Bringing her eyes downward, she saw a ramp winding its way up through the buildings and trees. Already, the woman was talking and leading them up As they walked up, they could look around and see they  birds on the branches, touch the bark and hear the insects. The woman talked more as they climbed. At the end of the ramp was another set of doors, and a room set high above the ground… in the very tops of the trees.

                Through the doors they went, and the girl was again assaulted by the sound of a siren and the whoosh of traffic. Confused, she strained to hear the birds and insects, but to no avail. Looking around she could see displays about pollution, greenhouse gases and some of the other things they had been talking about in class this term. But she could also see the tops of threes, and a galah sitting on a branch through a window. She put her hand to the glass, wishing she could get through. After a while they were ushered back into the peaceful natural tranquillity… down to a grassy area at the very base. Here, it was time for lunch. She lay on her back on the grass and munched away on a sandwich, watching a bird flying high above her. Her classmates sat amongst real rocks and faux-buildings, climbing them and playing around them. Mindful of her litter, she stuffed her paper bag into her pocket.

                Her teacher called for them to assemble and led them back through to where they had started. From here, he led them into the dark room she had observed earlier. There were some large computers and some interesting consoles. Their woman guide told them they could have a go at creating Brisbane City in 2090.

                The girl knew her Brisbane would have lots of trees.

                Heaps of birds.

                But definitely plenty of humans.

               

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